Growing Up

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Told that it would be the best
Thought that age was gonna do the rest
Just 'bout ready to leave the nest
But comes along an unexpected test





Your friends will all be leaving you
Those that won't, aren't new
The world is turning gray and blue
Waiting in life's longest queue

Never knowing what will be
Forgetting about being free
When will people ever see...
Take this warning straight from me





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AsIAm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 8:42 am

The Good: This was good!  I liked the last line especially.

The Bad: This wasn't the most OMG amazing thing I've read of yours, but I still liked it!

The Random: *random silence*

 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 9:49 am
Thanks (again...I should come up with a new word)! This was one of my earlier poems, I think I've grown a lot since then in my writing style. 
 
ImDumbStruck This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 9:24 pm
this is really cool! ^^ I especially like the last line
 
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