You and I

January 20, 2010
You, with your sharp tongue
And your hurtful voice.
You, with your glaring eyes
And your thoughtless noise.

You, with you bitter heart
And your hateful demands.
You, with your condescending manner
And pointless commands.

I, with my humble thoughts
And my hopeful heart.
I, with my willing ways
And my flawless part.

I, with my innocent words
And my carful eyes.
I, with my growing years
And my sinless lies.

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dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 2:19 pm
amazing! i love this. you really highlighted all the differences between yourself and this person :) i like how you made the differences so clear. last stanza is for sure my favorite:) and thanks for your feedback on my poem!!
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