At first...but now

January 15, 2010
By jeanwolf GOLD, Lodi, California
jeanwolf GOLD, Lodi, California
14 articles 11 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eternity is forever, falsehood is a never


At first... I was i big fish in a small pond.
but now... I'm drowining in Poseidon's sea.
At first... I was clumsy, creative,and careless.
but now... Its steal a curse.
At first... the worso big.
but now... It seems so small.
At first... I only saw with my eyes.
but now... I see my mind.
At first... I thought I was whole.
but now... I see i have many pieces.
At first... I couldn't see.
but now... I soar with wax wings.
At first... I slept.
but now... I dream.
At first... I cryed for lost words.
but now... I speek my mind.
At first... I was lost in the endless Labyrinth.
but now... I see the way.
At first... I followed a set path.
but now... I makw my own.
At first... I felt pain.
but now... I am numb.
At first... I was ignorant.
but now... Knowledge has set me free.
At first... I could only see the darkness at night.
but now... I see the stars.
At first... I was someone else.
but now... I am me.

The author's comments:
I did this for school last year and love the way it came out everyone who has read it has liked it so i hope you will too.

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i_am_ivy said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 1:12 am
Thank you for sharing this incredibly righteous poem! I really relate to what you're saying . . .

on Feb. 6 2010 at 6:24 pm
Audrea15 PLATINUM, Murphysboro, Illinois
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Everybody wants happiness. Nobody wants pain. But you cant have a rainbow. Without a little rain.

Please please check out my new stuff

on Feb. 6 2010 at 5:56 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

wow good job i really like it

on Feb. 5 2010 at 3:33 pm
Audrea15 PLATINUM, Murphysboro, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody wants happiness. Nobody wants pain. But you cant have a rainbow. Without a little rain.

Its so creative!Keep writing

jeanwolf GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 8:21 pm
jeanwolf GOLD, Lodi, California
14 articles 11 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eternity is forever, falsehood is a never

ok im going to say this now on the 5th line i messed up this is what i really wanted to say"At first...the world was so big."

this was a typo on my part sorry it goes with that whole Klutz thing. hahahaha


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