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A Corrected Song

November 27, 2009
By TheInvisibility BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
TheInvisibility BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
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"over the river
and through the woods
to grandmothers house we go"
i sing
while on the ferry
riding over the sound.

and i think...
this isnt right
that's not the way
to go to
grandmamma's house.

"on the ferry
and over the sound
to grandmamma's house i go"
i sing.

happy, satisfide
with what i did.


The author's comments:
this was inspired by the original piece "over the river and through the woods to grandmother's house we go". that wasnt acurately right so i changed it.

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