My cry for help.

November 11, 2009
Deep in the depths of hell,
Where my sorrow lays,
I am slain,
Bleeding and weeping,
My cry for help,
They laugh and laugh,
Louder and louder,
Impossible to escape,
Their hurtful voices,
Fill me with pain.

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StRoseCrusader said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:34 pm
Wow, that was amazing for your first poem! I was surprised because it gave me the feeling of desperation even when it was short and simple - to the point in fact.
SinfulBeauty15 replied...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 12:47 pm
Thank you. Im glad you liked it.
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