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As I look upon you

You turn around and stare

I thought you'd never see me

I thought you'd never care.

Your eyes are hard to see

But the blue stands out alone,

I can see your thoughts within them

Upon a face of stone.

I wish that I could tell you

the thoughts inside my head,

The words just won't come out

With a crooked smile instead.

I thought it was only me

Until you saw it too,

You know the truth inside me

I can't help loving you.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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ariwrites94 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 5:44 pm
Hey, wonderful work!!! this is amazing . . . U write beautifuly so continue writing!!! also plz check out my poem called "Sensitive Am I" and it would be appreciated a comment and a rating, thankx! and keep up the good work!!!
 
jordann_lil_guh said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 3:43 pm
This is such a sweet poem. Very cute and sweet. I like it! Keep writing please!
 
Anjo! said...
Jul. 19, 2009 at 7:07 pm
This.Is.Amazing. Wow. Thank you. Thats what i have been looking for. Please Please please dont stop writing.
 
Taki R. said...
Jul. 18, 2009 at 9:48 pm
CUTE!!!!
 
Mikhal W. said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 8:23 pm
have you ever read Neruda? Poetry is more than just rhyming and descriptions its about the inner feelings, the messages portrayed. Its supposed to be about humanity.
 
SpiritGirl101 said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 7:56 pm
Nice choice of words. I would have never though of instead to rhyme with head. :D
 
Joseph K. said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 7:34 am
I like this poem. It has a good flow.
 
harryFANatic<3 said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 5:31 pm
this poem is great! i hope u post more of ur work online. ur really good!
 
Sam T. said...
Mar. 18, 2009 at 7:28 pm
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Thats really good, :)
 
mindy M. said...
Mar. 1, 2009 at 10:49 pm
wow it reminds me of the love bella feels for edward in "twilight" such a love is very hard to explain ,let alone write, very nice piece.
 
blindingeffects said...
Nov. 20, 2008 at 2:53 pm
i love the lines:
"Your eyes are hard to see
But the blue stands out alone,
I can see your thoughts within them
Upon a face of stone."

it's my favourite section, and i love the analogy of it. great piece. love the rhyming, it makes it relatable.
 
lligwock said...
Oct. 29, 2008 at 12:38 am
I like this i can totally relate to it!
 
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