UNTIL THAT DAY...

November 9, 2009
By BaBii_GhErL PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
BaBii_GhErL PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Loving someone who doesnt love u is not wrong its just painful!


I can’t wait until that day…
The day you wake up to me sleeping by your side…
Me awaking up to you calling me your wife…
One day waking up to our first born baby cry…
Another day our kids waking us up to take them to school…
Years later meeting our first daughter’s boyfriend…
Years after that, me dressing our first born baby girl for her wedding, crying && giving her blessing to start her new life with the person she loves the most…
One year waking up to prepare our son’s wedding, ready to marry him with the girl of HIS dreams…
finally the last few moments on our rocking chairs sitting on our front porch on a hot sunny day, growing old with just one another by our sides, we reminisce about how well we raised our children to be independent, finally our last moment, to be put to rest buried next to one another, BUT I SWEAR TO WAIT FOR YOU BY THE GOLDEN GATES OF THE HOLY HEAVENS, TO BE REBORN, ONCE AGAIN, AND BUILD A LIFE WITH YOU, THE ONE WHO WAS ALWAYS TRUE && WHO IS FOREVER MY ONLY ONE!!


The author's comments:
*Dedicated to my only & only love of my life that I do plan to spend my life forever with…!!*

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on May. 24 2012 at 10:39 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Out of a world of laughter,
suddenly I am sad.
Day and night, it haunts me,
the kiss I never had"
--Midsummer by Syndey King Russell

"Chances lost are hope's torn up pages"-- "Chances" by Five for Fighting

This made me cry. I miss my ex-boyfriend that much, too. All I have ever wanted to do for him is to fulfill every single one of his needs, hopes, dreams, goals, and even fantasies ;)

Good job on conveying the emotion- the dreams about being his wife, the mother of his children are hopes that all girls share. But somehow, there's a difference between when you want just a husband and you love the dream of having a husband, and when you mean it- when from the depths of your heart you want to stand by that person through thick and thin no matter what and all you want to do is watch them succeed and be happy. I'm not sure how to describe it any other way. All I know is that there IS a difference between falling in the love with the idea of marriage and actually wanting to fulfill and stand by it. That's all I know...

Again, good job. If you'd like to read any of my works, comment, and rate, feel free to do so. Thank you for this piece of work. :)



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