Strong.

November 8, 2009
By Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
9 articles 0 photos 58 comments

I am tired of staying strong
when my whole world is falling apart;
I want to fall along with it
and give into the dark.

I told people to stay strong,
forgetting how hard it is to fight
All the demons and the pain
while blinded by the night.

Now I am slowy fading,
evaporating into thin air.
Ripping apart my soul
and stopping only if someone cares.

It hurts to stand tall
when I am shorter than most.
It hurts to live
when I am living in the shadow of a ghost.

Someone please hold me tight,
and never let me go.
I want to believe everything will be alright;
don't lie to me, yet give me hope.

I won't allow myself to feel happy
if it is all in vain.
I won't let myself feel sunlight,
only the wet, gloomy rain.

I am tired of staying strong
when my whole world is falling apart;
I want to fall along with it
and give into the dark.


The author's comments:
Well, I am tired of being strong when I feel so weak inside. I don't want to give in, but I think I might.

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on Jan. 4 2010 at 9:18 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

I like how you choose a topic relatable to so many people, but personalized it to give it unquie meaning.

by saying it sucks your committing heresay against yourself! LIAR lol jk jk jk

on Dec. 2 2009 at 3:28 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

I like it, I know the feeling. Easy to relate to =D

Heart SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 12:16 am
Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
9 articles 0 photos 58 comments
Comment? Come on guys. I want to know why it sucks! That way I can improve. Come one, help a girl out.


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