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October 26, 2009
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Shaking, burning,
Stand before the eyes of hundreds.
Shaking, burning,
The first notes from out your flesh will
Hiss like fuses until your chest
Swell, throat swell, heart swell, song swell and
Burst on all the hundreds. Leave them
Shaking, burning.

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Imaginedangerous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 7:32 am
You're right. This version is better. I like it.
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