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With your heart now opened
You begin to fall
With a cut and a slice
You could lose it all

Your tongue is first
It's clean and clear
She grasps her scalpel
Don't speak my dear

Next your eyes
So fast so sure
She says they were meant
for only her

Her third procedure
Is the latest trend
Your arms must hold her
Forever on end

Your legs are severed
then chained to the floor
Not even in death
may you walk out her door

In a slow and painful process
she dines upon your brain
Because a mindless puppy dog
is so much easier to train

Now it is the time
for her last defining act
She ends your "life"
With a heart attack

Your heart opened up
You began to fall
Now here you lie
You've lost it all





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USK59 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 1:36 pm
Very well written! Great subject and meaning. Belongs in the top 10!
 
NeverKnew said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 9:42 pm
Amazing. I love the visuals compared to the meaning. Word choice and flow was great, and I encourage you to keep writing. (:
 
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