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Is It You? MAG

By Anonymous

   i walk next to you

hoping and waiting

for your hand

to close around mine

but it never does

is it you?

i sit close to you

talking and believing

that you are listening

i wait

but you don't respond

is it you?

i stand beside you

wanting and wishing

for your arms

to hold me in your warm embrace

but they never do

is it you?

i now face you

needing and trying

to make you understand

that i love you

but this you cannot see

is it you?

or is it me?





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EmmaRo GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 9:26 am
EmmaRo GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
12 articles 10 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you." -Ray Bradbury

I really like your structure and the way it flows so seamlessly. Beautifully written!

on May. 28 2010 at 5:54 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

I liked it. vERY beautiful.  I agree torigurl. Check out some of my work if you can. Thanks:)

on May. 28 2010 at 10:27 am
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
32 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

aw :( i like it its just....sadish i sorry 4 whatevr ur goin thru