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I'M Freezing! MAG

By Anonymous

   I'm freezing! I'm freezing!

I'm absolutely cold!

I am shivering and shaking

Like pudding mold!

There are glaciers in my stomach,

There is sleet inside my bones!

I'm colder than the contents

Of a million ice cream cones!





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on Oct. 20 2010 at 11:41 pm
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

I loved it! It's just catchy!

on Oct. 20 2010 at 4:21 pm
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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The exclamation points were a nice touch.

on Oct. 20 2010 at 3:03 pm
i liked it

on Oct. 20 2010 at 3:00 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

let me say that i loved the poem, it had great rhythem and rhyme, and l loved how it sounded childesh yet still had a deeper meaning