I'M Freezing! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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   I'm freezing! I'm freezing!

I'm absolutely cold!

I am shivering and shaking

Like pudding mold!

There are glaciers in my stomach,

There is sleet inside my bones!

I'm colder than the contents

Of a million ice cream cones!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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I_am_the_only_me said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 11:41 pm
I loved it! It's just catchy!
 
Imaginedangerous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 4:21 pm
The exclamation points were a nice touch.
 
420playmate69 said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 3:03 pm
i liked it
 
Aerolin said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 3:00 pm
let me say that i loved the poem, it had great rhythem and rhyme, and l loved how it sounded childesh yet still had a deeper meaning
 
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