Inertia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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   Will someone please help me?

I'm all twisted inside.

I don't know who I am,

or my role in this life.

Mom, won't you fix me,

or at least give it a try?

Don't I look vincible with this tear in my eye?

Best friend, don't neglect me,

or just turn to your side.

Dad, will you protect me,

and supply a place to hide?

Someone untwist this helpless juvenile.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Lola_Black said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 3:06 pm
Gorgeos. You've captured the feeling of helplessness beautifully!!! I love it!
 
Schubster said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 11:27 am

Beautiful rhyming. This sounds like something that I'd write...maybe that's why I like it so much :P

Keep up the great work ^^

 
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