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I wait everyday
For you to pass my way
But when you finally do
I have nothing to say.

I always check both sides
For you to grace my eyes
But when you finally do
I fall behind my guise.

Why then do I bother, everyday?
Why can't I keep this crush at bay?
Why must I live in disarray
And pray for these feelings to just go away?

Because it's love and it can't be tamed;
I'll sit here and take all the blame
For waiting and watching ‘til the end of time,
Even though you'll never be mine.



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Girl-Writer said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 10:49 pm:
So everyone else has already said what I have to say - perhaps when you've written an anthology (?? is that correct? Anthology ^^) and you've become a famous author I'll be able to think of something new to say. Nice work Cruzer
 
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dominicana said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 4:09 pm:
really good a lot of people can relate to this keep on writing
 
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GoddessAbby said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 10:15 am:
This poem explains how I feel every singal day of my sad,sad life. I hope it will changs...soon.
 
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nikki1574 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:24 pm:
i love this!
haha that was pretty much my life
for two years
 
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Escaped said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 12:47 pm:
I'm in love with this...
Wonderful(:
Read some of mine and comment? I'd be honored(:
 
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annkaykay2011 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 9:30 am:
Very relateable.
Very good.
Keep it up!
 
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ThunderLovestheRain said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:31 am:
This is great...keep writing! :)
 
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thatchickalana said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 11:10 am:
i absolutely love this poem! & i love the flow & style of your writing.
 
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lostnhim said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 9:17 am:
Wow. This is a really good peice. Its very....deep.:)
 
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j-rye This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 12:28 am:
very relatable peice.
please read my work!
 
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krazeecasey13 said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 7:24 pm:
this is amazing
 
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ChristopherK This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 7:21 pm:
Wow--nicely put!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 7:50 pm :
aw this is realy cute. kOoL wording :))
 
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tennisislovee34 said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 6:34 pm:
awe, cute poem!
 
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JUST_ARIELLE:( said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 6:17 pm:
omg i love this!!!! its kinda sad 2. ik wut u mean by this peice. its like u want the feelings 2 go away because ur afraid of rlly saying nything. it soo cute.
 
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luvinlife519 said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 2:50 pm:
you incorperate such reality in this piece. i feel like you took a sneek peak in my life and put it into words! really good
 
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LeilaniLives said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 10:13 am:
Awh, I really like this! :)
The short lines in the beginning actually gave enough depth to the poem. Typically, poems to me aren't very well written when the lines are short, but you managed to maintain depth! Good job.
 
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XCLover said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 11:02 pm:
I like it. :) It's sweet and then sad at the end. Why won't she ever be his?
 
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Lixxy_93 said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 5:14 pm:
I love it. EdytD may be right that there are thousands of poems on this topic, but each one shows a different small piece of the many feels someone who feels this would be going through. Great poem
 
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kheart said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 3:09 pm:
this is a beautiful poem! love the last line the best!
 
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