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A Circle of Dogs This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Man teaches beast with gestures
And tries to teach
With words
But it does not work.

They sit in an untrained circle. Waiting
Not for man to speak,
But waiting for the inflection:
The anger or the loving, cooing of praise.

The spotted one sits with its head turned,
It watches man speak
Waiting for the inflection

For the lighting of the eyes

Even a beast knows
Where
the soul is.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 7:47 pm:
I found that I am obliged to agree with the individual below me. The specific subject matter seems a bit bewildering, yet the poem is wonderfully written. I only know that it says something about communication, and that I love it...
 
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Mikey said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:20 pm:
I really like this piece, it doesn't sound a lot like most poetry subject wise. I'm not sure exactly what this poem is about, but I'm guessing it's about either communication or god. Either way, it's awesome.
 
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