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You're a mountian in a prarie
standing tall but all alone
the universe looks up at you
because you're so well known

But you look down on them
wishing you could shrink that small
cause with greatness should come happieness
but you aren't glad at all





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love2run said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 7:43 pm
wow. these are great! i just went through like 15 of the things you wrote and i love them all! great job!!!
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 7:50 pm
Thank you! I saw that someone was going through my works and I was like wow! Someone is so nice! Hahaha but sadly they won't let me delete works, so some of my stuff is not as good as others (my older work.) Keep checking back, I have some new work awaiting approval that I'm quite pleased with.
 
love2run replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 8:38 pm
that's awesome! i love your style!! haha i just submitted a ton of writing, but i'm kinda new to this site and i don't have much yet...
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 9:10 pm
I'm really glad you like it! I'll totally check out your work when I get the chance! Thanks so much for reading:]
 
love2run replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 10:31 pm
haha you're welcome and thanks!
 
savinGrace said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 9:00 pm
Very pretty:) Good job!
 
greg9381 said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 9:45 pm
This is great! I like it a lot, keep writing.
 
cross.fire said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 5:31 pm
It seems that I love all of your poems. Keep writing, please!
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 5:35 pm
Thank you very much!
 
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