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September 5, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


Please shut up
Listen to my voice
let it was your soul
you really have no choice

Close those dimond eyes
keep your mouth at rest
I know it may be hard
but could you try your best?

Cause once I found my voice
(It took me so much time)
I'm never letting go
all these words are mine


The author's comments:
I wrote this when someone was ignoring me when I tried to talk about my poetry. I wanted them to know how important it was to me that the understood it.

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on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:06 am
dreamgirl01 BRONZE, NEW YORK CITY, New York
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter what color you are, everyone is equal and we are all human beings.

yours poetry is so good and i thought i was good

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:28 pm
delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
28 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because her eyes don't tear doesn't mean her heart doesn't cry. And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean there's nothing wrong






-Author Unknown

I really like it...very creative. I can relate.

on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:45 pm
TheBerkeleyBear BRONZE, Los Altos, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never put off until tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow."

I loved the beginning, but I feel it felt of its meaning at the end. 5 stars :)




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