MY beautiful past

August 27, 2009
By sunila samuel BRONZE, Lahore, Other
sunila samuel BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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MY BEAUTIFUL PAST
It's my yesterday that i miss the most,
All the beautiful moments that i have lost.
The warmth presence of my friends,
the loud laughter still echoes in my ear,
i still feel the presence,the laughter but when i look around no one is near.
Those beautiful days i can feel in the air
but my friends and my beautiful past is no more here.
The world is running fast but i m still lost in my beautiful past.


The author's comments:
hi..i m not a writer.i have never written anything before.this is the first time iwrote sumthing.
it was just a try.
not that good.

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on Sep. 14 2009 at 6:39 pm
ericas2113 SILVER, Congers, New York
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ahh i like it a lot. i can relate too =P

on Sep. 14 2009 at 4:39 am
That poem is beautiful. Brings a tear to the eye. I believe you have a lot of talent. Keep it up. I'll be watching for your work :)

on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:17 am
sunila samuel BRONZE, Lahore, Other
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o thnk u so much.thnks a alot for appreciating.

thnx

on Sep. 11 2009 at 4:51 pm
stephaniekip PLATINUM, Cranford, New Jersey
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Don't put yourself down, your poem is beautiful. Keep it up, maybe you'll grow to love it! :)


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