MY beautiful past

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MY BEAUTIFUL PAST
It's my yesterday that i miss the most,
All the beautiful moments that i have lost.
The warmth presence of my friends,
the loud laughter still echoes in my ear,
i still feel the presence,the laughter but when i look around no one is near.
Those beautiful days i can feel in the air
but my friends and my beautiful past is no more here.
The world is running fast but i m still lost in my beautiful past.





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stephaniekip This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 4:51 pm
Don't put yourself down, your poem is beautiful. Keep it up, maybe you'll grow to love it! :)
 
Sunila S. replied...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 9:17 am
o thnk u so much.thnks a alot for appreciating.
thnx
 
Butterfly1992 replied...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 4:39 am
That poem is beautiful. Brings a tear to the eye. I believe you have a lot of talent. Keep it up. I'll be watching for your work :)
 
atreyu2113 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 6:39 pm
ahh i like it a lot. i can relate too =P
 
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