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<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 8:58 pm
its cute!! i like it:D
 
dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 6:44 pm
even though it's short, i think it has a lot of feeling and meaning :) i love it! great job...so full of emotion! check out some of my work, and i will keep checking out yours :)
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 10:19 pm
I love the fact that with so little words you use in this piece can reflect a meaning rather than a piece that uses a hundred words maybe to reflect.
 
aLittlebitLess said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 3:17 pm
cute :) nice rhyming
 
unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 3:38 pm
It's cute, but I suggest expanding it, to give it more depth.
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 10:55 pm
Short, sweet, and to the point... nice. Keep it up!
 
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