Him

August 21, 2009
By Darcie Lee BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
Darcie Lee BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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You said you would never lie to me,
that we were meant to be.
I cared about you a lot,
now my love feels bought.
When you left, I said I would be strong,
I lied to myself, I was completly wrong.
I trusted you when you went out of town,
comes to find out, you were fooling around.
You hurt me and broke my heart,
now I see we were meant to be apart.


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on Sep. 2 2009 at 1:41 am
AlyssaSunico DIAMOND, Taguig City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Intelligence plus character is the goal of true education. - Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.
Music is in a higher revelatiuon than knowledge and wisdom - Ludwig Van Beethoven

So sad but beautiful. I felt that once this poems reminds me of him.

on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:20 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i love how you captured all the emotions of a break-up. it's a great poem :) check out and comment on some of my work please. oh and my fave part is for sure the last line, so rhythmic and true!!!

on Aug. 31 2009 at 3:24 pm
wow this is really sad...

on Aug. 29 2009 at 12:20 am
amberlynn.zero PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
i admire darkness, its so pretty,
i wish i could be pretty like that...

i lke it. good job




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