Him

August 21, 2009
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You said you would never lie to me,
that we were meant to be.
I cared about you a lot,
now my love feels bought.
When you left, I said I would be strong,
I lied to myself, I was completly wrong.
I trusted you when you went out of town,
comes to find out, you were fooling around.
You hurt me and broke my heart,
now I see we were meant to be apart.





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dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 7:20 pm
i love how you captured all the emotions of a break-up. it's a great poem :) check out and comment on some of my work please. oh and my fave part is for sure the last line, so rhythmic and true!!!
 
Alyssa S. said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 1:41 am
So sad but beautiful. I felt that once this poems reminds me of him.
 
pushingblueroses said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 3:24 pm
wow this is really sad...
 
amberlynn.zero said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 12:20 am
i lke it. good job
 
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