You Saved Me

August 15, 2009
By JacintaT BRONZE, Brisbane, Other
JacintaT BRONZE, Brisbane, Other
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You came to me from outta no where,
when things were getting more than I could bear.
And when I'd hit rock bottom you mad me smile,
actually it was the first time I had in quite awhile.

Sometimes I think your just too good to be true,
but right from the moment I saw you I knew.
That you would be absoloutly perfect for me,
Now look after my heart, I've given you the key.

The author's comments:
My first poetry submission, negative and positive feedback would be great.

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on Apr. 9 2010 at 12:48 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

this is GREAT!!!  keep writing becuz u have some real talent :)

on Sep. 10 2009 at 5:04 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

You said you envy me XD but I have to say, that i envy you! This poem is really great! Definitely a favorite of mine ^^




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