Dont Make Me Remember

August 22, 2009
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I dont want to remember,
I dont want to feel,
The emotions and the noises,
and memories to real.

I dont want to look back,
and see what used to be,
I can hardly move forward,
Let alone pretend to be happy.

Dont make me see that face,
Dont make me hear the voice,
I will start to doubt again,
And rethink every choice...

I will suddenly grow weak,
like I stand in sinking sand,
My strength will die and I will cry,
And my head will fall in my hands,

the pain will overtake me,
Even I wont know what to do,
So dont make me remember,
When there once was a you...





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writingsavedmylife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 9:14 pm
I absolutely love this! The rhyme scheme is great. The flow is great. And I relate to it perfectly. That's the key to poetry... appealing to emotions and you've got it down. Keep writing!
 
Lucy4himnotu replied...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 12:56 pm
thank you so much. That is very encouraging.
 
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