You told me...

You told me that you loved me,

You told me that you cared

You said I was the only one you loved. But you told her the same thing.





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timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 2, 2010 at 9:41 am

you are welcome :) I would love to read it if you ever put it on here.

 

 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 3:29 pm
Reminds me of a butterfly with a broken wing. Sad little powerful image.
 
MidnightAngel7 replied...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Wow...thanks! Now I feel like I have to write about a butterfly with a broken wing...thanks for your comment and insperation!
 
thepreechyteenager said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 2:27 pm

ooh

I hope that acctually didn't happen to you

Loved the voice in it though- very bitter sounding

 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 7:26 pm
This is the definition of short and sweet. In less than 30 words you conveyed your emotion perfectly. Very nice job...
 
lovespromise<3 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 3:25 pm
Thank you!...no hugs... :-( my friend just said I told you so....
 
In_Love_Loved said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:16 pm
Oh wow. I'm really sorry. But at least a powerful piece of writing came out of it... I hope you got hugged for this.
 
Anblue said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 11:31 am
stupid guys
 
SarahZ replied...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 11:35 am
Yup..... ik this one kinda sucks but I wrote in like 2 seconds.. ty for the comment
 
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