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hand in hand, side by side,
with the summer sky as our guide,
beating hearts keeping time
as our exhalations start to rhyme,
and the heavens all align,
and your body fits with mine,
and the metronome grows faint
as god starts to finger paint;

and the crickets do their dance,
fireflies swirling in a trance,
softly filling up the night
with a thousand beams of light,
your hair tickling my ears –
we are young beyond our years.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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jcrisp said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 3:34 am:
just curious but how many views did this have when it got in the magazine ? :)
 
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sally farts said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 1:21 pm:
wwow ummm......... ok then! thats so cool!!!
 
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darb_iamsecond said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 1:18 pm:
I really like this!!! :)
Reminds me of happy things like love during the summer, to bad it always has to end.
 
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MizzImaginative said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 9:33 am:
WOW truly amazing loved the way you described your feelings and the atmosphere ! 5 stars all the way! :D
 
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taylor11 said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 12:21 am:
this is greattt
 
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kungfud00d said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 8:01 pm:
Great poem, loved the tempo, structure...everything
 
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toЯii said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 3:19 pm:
Wow.
I absolutely loved this <3
 
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