Summer Love MAG

August 18, 2009
By dollesque BRONZE, Centreville, Virginia
dollesque BRONZE, Centreville, Virginia
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hand in hand, side by side,
with the summer sky as our guide,
beating hearts keeping time
as our exhalations start to rhyme,
and the heavens all align,
and your body fits with mine,
and the metronome grows faint
as god starts to finger paint;

and the crickets do their dance,
fireflies swirling in a trance,
softly filling up the night
with a thousand beams of light,
your hair tickling my ears –
we are young beyond our years.



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jcrisp BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:34 am
jcrisp BRONZE, Sutton Valence, Other
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just curious but how many views did this have when it got in the magazine ? :)

sally farts said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:21 pm
wwow ummm......... ok then! thats so cool!!!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:18 pm
darb_iamsecond BRONZE, None Ya, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Psalms 63
Because your love is better than life,
my lips will glorify you.

I will praise you as long as I live,
and in your name I will lift up my hands.

I really like this!!! :)

Reminds me of happy things like love during the summer, to bad it always has to end.

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:33 am
MizzImaginative SILVER, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be you... don't pretend to be someone else.

WOW truly amazing loved the way you described your feelings and the atmosphere ! 5 stars all the way! :D

taylor11 GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 12:21 am
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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this is greattt

on Jan. 29 2010 at 8:01 pm
kungfud00d BRONZE, Murphytown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Get up

Great poem, loved the tempo, structure...everything

on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:19 pm
tori-haven BRONZE, Pilot Mountain, North Carolina
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Wow.

I absolutely loved this <3


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