Did you know?

July 30, 2009
By Ismeraly Torres BRONZE, Homestead, Florida
Ismeraly Torres BRONZE, Homestead, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Look at me
Look at me

A nibble of a glance
An abrupt recognition


I’m here!
Can’t you see

Your face intrudes my slumber
Did you know!?
You provoke a warm rising vehemence
Rambling through
Finding its release where I least aspire,
My eyes
Did you know!?
I’m drowning in despair
Did you know!?
I still care, I still care
Did you know!?
I’m breaking, I’m breaking!
Did you know!?
As you stand there with your illuminating smile
I sit here molding into anguish
Did you know!?
Our memories carouse me
They choke me!
Did you know?

you don’t

you don’t know.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Aug. 21 2009 at 2:21 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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i liked it a lot! :)

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:42 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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this is really good!!

Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:06 pm
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
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Wow, this is absolutely amazing!! I can feel the anger and restlessness.

Great job :)

on Aug. 20 2009 at 4:19 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

Powerful. I really like it. you're use of repition for the same phrase really gives it a raw feel. good job!!

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