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Look at me
Please
Look at me

A nibble of a glance
An abrupt recognition

Look

I’m here!
Can’t you see

Your face intrudes my slumber
Did you know!?
You provoke a warm rising vehemence
Rambling through
Finding its release where I least aspire,
My eyes
Did you know!?
I’m drowning in despair
Did you know!?
I still care, I still care
Did you know!?
I’m breaking, I’m breaking!
Did you know!?
As you stand there with your illuminating smile
I sit here molding into anguish
Did you know!?
Our memories carouse me
They choke me!
Did you know?


no,
you don’t


you don’t know.





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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 21, 2009 at 2:21 am
i liked it a lot! :)
 
<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 6:42 pm
this is really good!!
 
Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 6:06 pm
Wow, this is absolutely amazing!! I can feel the anger and restlessness.
Great job :)
 
Writerzhand said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 4:19 pm
Powerful. I really like it. you're use of repition for the same phrase really gives it a raw feel. good job!!
 
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