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You Tore My Heart, I'll Tear You Face

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Talked even though you looked
as if you wished to unearth
the silence that once brooked
the distance between your eyes and mine
Sometimes it's like our friendship
is walking on frayed twine
And even though you took my heart
and tore it with your teeth,
you tell me I should put my blade
back inside its sheath





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~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 8:40 pm
this is absolutely amazing. keep writing it was awesome!
 
kookoodood said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 3:15 am
I completely identify with this, as does everyone with that one person they have unfinished business with. It's not every day where a poem that actually has a rhyme/meter actually speaks to me on more than a superficial level. Brava, very well done.
KooKoo
 
Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 3:21 am
ooh very dark. the last four lines are perfect
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 5:44 pm
I agree. It is indeed very sinister. Love it, and love the last line!
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 5:31 pm
I wouldn't be able to find a single thing wrong with this poem if i tried. Its so amazing! Ahhh! Its so good!
 
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