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i wish

I wish
That you could only hear me cry
In the middle of the night
I wish you could see
the dreams that haunt me
i wish you could remember
that I am only human

I wish you could feel
How heavy the burden
Of my love for you
On my shoulders



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Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 10:05 am
i can relate. great poem. ive tried to write about that before, but it always comes out too complicated. great job
 
~purple_musician~ replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 3:05 pm
Thank you so much. and a word of advise, just write what you feel. It may seem complicated but if you know what you're talking about I'm sure others will also. :) thanks
 
So-calledLife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 3:28 pm
wow...you said it. i can totally relate.
 
~purple_musician~ replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 3:03 pm
thank you! :)
 
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