but you cheated

April 24, 2009
By katikatw BRONZE, Kettering, Ohio
katikatw BRONZE, Kettering, Ohio
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i was so in love with you
the minute we met,
my eyes met yours
and i knew our hearts
would feel the same.
after months being with you
i soon fell in love
i thought we were meant
but you made the mistake.
you can sorry as much as you want
but im not going to listen to your selfishness.
if you really loved me
you wouldnt have cheated
i hope she makes you happy
because im living in misery
everyday i think about
how bad you hurt me.

The author's comments:
i was in love for the first time with him and he cheated on me.
i found out 6 days before our 10 months.the girl he cheated on me with called me and told me. i was sooo hurt

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This article has 4 comments.

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2009 at 8:11 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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aww i like this alot!

on Aug. 17 2009 at 2:35 am
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Great poem.

I dont agree you shouldnt forgive him though. Everyone deserves a second chance. He messed up. If he seems sincerely sorry you should give him a second chance and if he messes up again cut him loose. Dont mess up your chances of love.

on Aug. 16 2009 at 9:42 pm
Dancer4life GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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I love it

on Aug. 15 2009 at 1:32 am
AnneMarrie BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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I like your poem but its a bummer that he cheated

i bet it hurts but ur rite not to forgive him


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