Punished Angel

April 22, 2009
By Anonymous

Laced up shoes, her backpack on
Walking out the door
Don’t know what the world upholds
She was never told
Bloody lip,
Both black and blue
Foundation cover the wounds
People ask sworn not to tell
What she was suppose to keep…

Be patient love, I mean no harm.
Holding cut up arms
Spilling blood onto the floor
Pushed out the door
A punished angel caught in this house
Pushing through the pain
A day too late

The time is due
Too much to consume
One life gone
Gather up this time of fate
A little too late.

Laced up shoes, her backpack on
Walking out the door
Don’t know what the world upholds
She was never told
Bloody lip,
Both black and blue
Foundation cover the wounds
People ask sworn not to tell
What she was suppose to keep…
While she dies in her sleep…


The author's comments:
i wrote this for all of the girls running away from a deamon in their lives. an abusive boyfriend, a drunk father, a hating mother. it tells the story of a girl trying ot escape her problems in the world.

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on Aug. 18 2009 at 2:30 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Yeah it really does remind me of concrete angel. Its so sad. You did such a good job with this. Keep it up!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 1:24 am
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

This is very good, but sad. It reminds me of the song "Concrete Angel" by Martina McBride.

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