August 10, 2009
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Kisses in the morning,
Love is all the time,

Our Love was so amazing,
It should have been a crime,

My bedspread is always messed up,
hoping you'd come back and i can apoligize for screwing up,

i never really liked him,
he smooth talked me into it,

and now regret it,
so this is the best i can put it,

staring out the window waiting for you,
listening to the voice-mail you left makes me blue,

i never wanted to hurt you,
i was just confused,

about us,
about you,

Please beleive me when i write you this letter,
Sending it everywhere hoping you would get it,

Please don't make me feel this pain any longer,
you leaving was my punishment,

im sorry the rules were bent,
hurting you was never what i mean't

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Gatorpoet said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 4:47 pm
Sorry but you used to many of the same words to rhyme and the flow wasn't AMAZING but good try
Zero_K This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 6:11 pm
So sad! And beautifully written. Thanks for you comment!
-Blessed Be!
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