Chemistry

August 10, 2009
By katie_bugg GOLD, Scott Depot, West Virginia
katie_bugg GOLD, Scott Depot, West Virginia
14 articles 14 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But my heart, it is brighter than all the many stars in the sky"









-Edgar Allan Poe


A surge went through my body
and i fell quickly
I had grabbed onto a wire
A wire of electricity
of chemistry
We got hot
right from the start
we began to sweat
and we began to touch
but in the end it was all to much
I had to leave
and you said you wouldn't miss this
so i regretted going
But you just weren't worth it

The author's comments:
I felt more connected to this peice then any other because we all have that certain guy that just makes our hearts race anytime you are with them, but then in the end you realize that they are really bigs jerks and you can't stand to be around them.

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 9:15 am
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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I like this alot good job! Very relatable and good use of imagery. Write on!<3

on Jan. 7 2010 at 5:00 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Ahhhh. Powerrfulllllll. :). This poem can really get this kickin lol. jk. But it is amazing. Good job.

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on Aug. 16 2009 at 11:35 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
This poem practically made my heart race. SUPER JOB with connecting the reader!!




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