I'm a Mindless Machine

August 10, 2009
By kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments

My eyelids are drooping
My body feels gloopy
I'm so tired I could fall flat on my face

My arms are wet noodles
I can't even doodle
And my legs won't even take one single step

My mind is moving slowly
I think it's going backwards
It's falling behind in the human race

The computer in front of me
It's a little mind-numbing
Swallowing up my brain completely whole

My fingers are dropping
Like bird frass on the keyboard
I can't keep myself from stopping

Someone please help me
I'm glued to the screen
Someone yank me away
I'm a mindless machine


The author's comments:
This is what I feel when I'm at the computer. Whether it's on facebook, working, or writing... even messing on photoshop.

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on Jan. 5 2010 at 9:25 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
thanks! check out my other stuff too!

Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 4:44 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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"Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%." -KT

i like it!

on Aug. 24 2009 at 1:32 pm
whoooo! creative stuff even about computer working. love it




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