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heat, this thing exists between us
no hatred, yet the fire soars
exhausted from this inferno, we lie
peacefull in the flaming grass around us
yet we see no red, only the beautiful blue of the angelic eyes
and we stay, unable to move, and unwanting to
my parched breath given the elixir of life
stay a while, be still a while
the suns rays beat down, and i feel nothing but calm
we feel nothing but calm.
two entities existing on one heart
we are here only for eachother
therefore only for ourselves
selflessly selfish, we lie.





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ReneetheGreat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 12:34 pm
WOW! I absolutely LOVE this! I know exactly how you feel, and your choice of words is PERFECT! I love the contrast, selflessly selfish. AAH!
 
RridLeR replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 7:12 pm
Well,thankyou,very much.. it's my favourite thing i've written,But I havent gotten any sort of feedback on it..nice to know someone else likes it too :D
 
ReneetheGreat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 10:57 pm
I more than like it, I LOVE IT! You should read some of my work and give me some advice :)
 
RridLeR replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 7:26 am
I dont know if my advice will be of much worth,or if you'll even need it.but,I'll check your stuff out :)
 
ReneetheGreat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 1:20 pm
Thanks! Im sure I need it!
 
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