Rock the Boat

August 4, 2009
By iWrite GOLD, Oneonta, New York
iWrite GOLD, Oneonta, New York
13 articles 5 photos 6 comments

I rocked the boat and now I’m drowning,
In tears that fall so fast
A never ending stream of pain,
That seems will always last.
I gave you everything I had,
I tried to give you more,
And now I’m left with nothing,
As I’m falling to the floor.
It’s hard to believe it’s over,
When I’m still breathing in air,
Because the room feels so empty,
When I know you won’t be there.
And they say I’ll learn a lesson,
And they say I’ll be okay,
But for now I’ll just sit here and wish,
The pain would go away.



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on Jul. 1 2010 at 5:44 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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wow this is a great poem-so powerful and full with endless meaning!! awesome job-soooo well written and a great pic. choice to go with it!!! please check out and comment on some of my work when you get the chance!! :)




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