You Slay Me

August 4, 2009
By Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi


Hanging over empty space
desperately trying to forget your face
Your voice falls on deaf ears
I'm screaming so loud but nobody hears
My mouth is like cotton and I can't speak
I'm shielding my heart from the havoc you wreak
You're like a serrated knife through my heart
It's like you're trying your best to tear it apart



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on Aug. 18 2009 at 1:04 am
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

definitely powerful

Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2009 at 2:20 am
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
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This is outstanding! The words (and rhyme) rolled off my tongue perfectly.

I love the "serrated knife" part.

on Aug. 12 2009 at 10:17 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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O_O... very dramatic. I can relate to this 100%. In the way I read it, it has a beat to it, and I like that beat. Great job! Nice title.




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