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Standing on the rooftop
feel like I’m gonna fall
I tell myself I love you
but I don’t feel anything at all
Go back in time to Saturday
when everything was right
I wish that you could be mine
if just for one more night
Standing on the rooftop
feel like I’m gonna fall
I tell myself I love you
but I don’t feel anything at all




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HOT-P!NK said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 1:24 pm:
this is really good! and i wrote a poem that has the same vibe but i wouldnt do tht either..
 
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Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 10:12 pm:
i like the way it repeats itself. And again, 'that boy'!! crycry... however, I like it. A bit melancholic, but who's to complain? In my opinion, some of the best poems a tad bit depressing. Not to scare you, but I can imagine myself on the rooftop, sobbing over 'that boy'.... i wouldn't, not in a million, but as I was reading it I saw myself in that position.
 
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