Numb (Fall Away)

August 3, 2009
By Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi


Standing on the rooftop
feel like I’m gonna fall
I tell myself I love you
but I don’t feel anything at all
Go back in time to Saturday
when everything was right
I wish that you could be mine
if just for one more night
Standing on the rooftop
feel like I’m gonna fall
I tell myself I love you
but I don’t feel anything at all



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OneChance GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 1:24 pm
OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥be who YOU want to be, not what OTHERS want to see. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

this is really good! and i wrote a poem that has the same vibe but i wouldnt do tht either..

on Aug. 12 2009 at 10:12 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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i like the way it repeats itself. And again, 'that boy'!! crycry... however, I like it. A bit melancholic, but who's to complain? In my opinion, some of the best poems a tad bit depressing. Not to scare you, but I can imagine myself on the rooftop, sobbing over 'that boy'.... i wouldn't, not in a million, but as I was reading it I saw myself in that position.


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