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I chased the small diamonds
as i searched through their
minds,
searching for the right one
He
Never
Showed
it hit me,
a bullet to the chest,
the aftermath much worse,
the thought darted through
my mind, desperately
trying to escape,
that there will never be the
right one
i stop, melt, and become
the small road they travel





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Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 5:00 am
Very cool! I like this a lot ;]
 
Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 9:47 pm
Thanks... : )
 
AnnonymousFate replied...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 10:33 am
Very bleak, but very insightful and very beautiful. I believe poetry, no matter what it is written about should captivate a certain kind of beauty. You certainly did a fine job accomplishing that. Bravo. Please check out some of my stuff, particularly "Just a Guy" Thanks:)
 
FlamableFyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 2:52 pm
sure, i'd love to check out some of your stuff, and thanks a lot!
 
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