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Likewise.

Incoherency.

Appease me.

Release me.

Sustain me.

Contain me.

Possess me.

Undress me.

Bruise me.

Use me.

“Thrill” me.

“Pill” me.

Raise me.

Please, save me.





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MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 10:35 am
Wow...that's really sad. :( But really good, like the person thinking this was pleading to get out of what ever was hurting her. How desperate she was...it's really good but even better when you put your mind to it. :)
 
okie-dokie said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 6:23 am
I have to say this is amazing. With just to words you can really say so much. At one poitned you commented on my poem and I said I had a better one that was still being edited. Well its has gone through editing and is now on the site. I would like to know your opinion. Here's the link. TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/127380/A-Man/
P.S The other poem you commented on was called at the cross.
 
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