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The pain
and longing I felt for
you
is now replaced
and filled by someone
perfect

The tears
and sorrow I felt for
him
is now replaced
and overflowed with joy
thank you





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ultrabookworm said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 7:24 pm
Hm... I kind of find myself liking this one because it seems to have unspoken depths of meaning to it. On the criticism side, there might have been a few more hints as to what the person in the poem was thankful for... but it's still so good!
 
Sarah S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 3:02 pm
thanks! :) i appreciate all thoughts on my work! read/comment on some more please!
 
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