Thank You

August 9, 2009
By silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3


The pain
and longing I felt for
you
is now replaced
and filled by someone
perfect

The tears
and sorrow I felt for
him
is now replaced
and overflowed with joy
thank you



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on Sep. 14 2009 at 3:02 pm
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3

thanks! :) i appreciate all thoughts on my work! read/comment on some more please!

on Sep. 11 2009 at 7:24 pm
ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
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Hm... I kind of find myself liking this one because it seems to have unspoken depths of meaning to it. On the criticism side, there might have been a few more hints as to what the person in the poem was thankful for... but it's still so good!




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