Five

August 8, 2009
By Layton GOLD, Abilene, Texas
Layton GOLD, Abilene, Texas
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Isolation is starting to lose its meaning,
there isn't a word for what I' am feeling.
One down here and two gone away,
I scream but no one can hear what I say.
I' am a jerk and I feel broken,
it feels like someone has stolen,
a piece of me that is still rollin,
pain not yet but a new door was opened.
I never took a step but I'm already in,
fingers all over where do I begin?
Emotions everywhere from that eggshell mind,
pouring all over me and I'm still behind.
Come off bigger as the old book says,
nothing else matters look what she has read.
We'll amount to nothing just sit down and take it,
After all they're whats real and we always fake it.
Follow them back and watch as they climb,
you knew it happened but it stuck in your mind.
What is your next action and how do you praise,
you know it's not right listen as she says...

The author's comments:
This is one of my very first poems, written about an insane girlfriend.

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jbeach SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 7:36 am
jbeach SILVER, APO, Other
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heyyyyyy punk, good poem. haha. keep it up dude


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