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Leaving This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


Momma ...
You don't know it
but I'm leaving now.
My life hasbeen
turned upside down
since we had our fight.

Momma...
I'm leaving now.
I put a note on your pillow that
explained how I feel.
I don't know, Momma, but I
think thisis for real.

Momma ...
I am walking out the
door now,hoping
that I don't forget all
the good memories that
we havehad.
I'll close and lock the
door.

Momma ...
By theway ... I love you!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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sillypixxi said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 7:59 pm
this shows the reality of a relationship with parents. it says so much to those with experince with this type of situation. it could be perceived as a methaphor or very realistic.
 
JasmineSmith said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 3:41 pm
Wow i think this is great! Very realistic. I don't like the end though. It could have been stronger.
 
pearl♥ said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 2:51 pm
yea a little uhh, different but its good :)
 
SDBalla531 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 6:55 am
i think its awkward. but good.
 
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