July 24, 2009
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Half him and half her course through my veins
They are there

My hair, my blood, my short fingernails
There are me

Although I am both, there is but one I want to be:

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EdytD said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 11:12 pm
I agree w/ inkspired. I think if you wanted to play with this poem, it would be really interesting to add some lines about the similar body parts - the same curved nails... give some graphic imagery that the reader can see clearly in his/her mind. Either way, great job!
Inkspired said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 1:25 pm
This is so cool! I love it! Very short, sweet, and it rings true. I LOVE the last line!
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