Genetics

July 24, 2009
By Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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Half him and half her course through my veins
They are there

My hair, my blood, my short fingernails
There are me

Although I am both, there is but one I want to be:
Me



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EdytD SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2009 at 11:12 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I agree w/ inkspired. I think if you wanted to play with this poem, it would be really interesting to add some lines about the similar body parts - the same curved nails... give some graphic imagery that the reader can see clearly in his/her mind. Either way, great job!

on Aug. 18 2009 at 1:25 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is so cool! I love it! Very short, sweet, and it rings true. I LOVE the last line!




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