Smooth-Talker

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Thorn in my side
or apple of my eye?
It's hard to tell when you're
such a smooth-talking guy.





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Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 10:02 pm
true that.
 
unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 6:37 pm
AWESOME! In just four lines, you've written such an intense poem.
 
April. said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 4:02 pm
Short. Funny. Cute. VERY true. I love the simplicity and truth of it. :]
 
emo.panda101 said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 4:29 pm
very short buh very moving
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 9:55 pm
okay. so i reread this when i shared it with some friends... at first i thought the poem was a funny one, but then i reread it in a more serious way, and found it was actually kinda sad. So, sorry about my hysterics, it's just the way i read it and when.
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 9:12 pm
O.O......>_<....O.o.....*_*....#_#.......8=)......L...M...A...O i've spent the last 5 minutes in hysterics. I might be short, but it gives me a long laugh.
 
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