Doorways

Sometimes our minds are doorways,
Not sure which way to go or door to choose,
So willing to win,
So afraid to loose,
Loose our minds and never go back,
Like relationships that never work,
Two people is what it takes,
But ones commitment lacks,
You cry and cry in pain,
Not sure how to deal with yourself and what you lost,
Don’t worry mommy is here for you,
Different stories lead to different problems,
Make sure you listen closely otherwise you wont be able to help,
Covered in insects, dishes piling,
Not sure how this happened or how it came to be,
Maybe a door will close, another will open,
Hoping a doorway leads to the real me.





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RheaD.Ravenfinger This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 11:35 am
Wow. This is really interesting. I have poems if anyone is interested in reading them.
 
Metal_Mulisha replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 11:44 pm
Interesting in a bad way?O.O
 
RheaD.Ravenfinger This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 11:17 am
Interesting in a good way. It points out that everyone goes through times when they're confused or trying to understand themselves better. That's what I get from the poem.
 
Metal_Mulisha replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 7:19 am
That's exactly what it means, great job of understanding and thanks for reading my poem:]
 
LostinthisWorld.67 said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:21 pm
I love this your really really good. x)
 
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