Doorways

August 1, 2009
By Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.


Sometimes our minds are doorways,
Not sure which way to go or door to choose,
So willing to win,
So afraid to loose,
Loose our minds and never go back,
Like relationships that never work,
Two people is what it takes,
But ones commitment lacks,
You cry and cry in pain,
Not sure how to deal with yourself and what you lost,
Don’t worry mommy is here for you,
Different stories lead to different problems,
Make sure you listen closely otherwise you wont be able to help,
Covered in insects, dishes piling,
Not sure how this happened or how it came to be,
Maybe a door will close, another will open,
Hoping a doorway leads to the real me.


The author's comments:
This poem here has a couple of different so called "issues" which all lead to the same door.

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on Jun. 13 2010 at 7:19 am
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.

That's exactly what it means, great job of understanding and thanks for reading my poem:]

on Jun. 10 2010 at 11:17 am
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:4-8

Interesting in a good way. It points out that everyone goes through times when they're confused or trying to understand themselves better. That's what I get from the poem.

on Jun. 8 2010 at 11:44 pm
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.

Interesting in a bad way?O.O

on Jun. 7 2010 at 11:35 am
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:4-8

Wow. This is really interesting. I have poems if anyone is interested in reading them.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 6:21 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

I love this your really really good. x)




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