Untimely Love

July 27, 2009
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my body is hollow
my heart gone
i am dead.

i cannot feel
nor love
nor see any light
because my heart is truely gone.
broken like a china doll dropped,
i said three magic words
and your response?
i cry;
its the only thing i can do
the only thing i want to do,
because everything else reminds me of you,
because i am hollow,
with no heart:
i am dead.

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Meghan said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 2:44 am
This poem is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. I like how you compare your heart to a broken china doll. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem, understand it, and enjoy it. Keep writing.
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