Forget Him

July 21, 2009
By Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Like men we'll face the murderous, cowardly pack, pressed to the wall--Dying but fighting back." -Claude Mckay


forget his name, forget his face. forget his kiss, his warm embrace. forget the love that you once knew, remember he has someone new. forget him when they play your song, remember when you cried all night long. forget how close you once were, remember he has chosen her. forget how you memorized his walk, forget the way he used to talk. forget the things he used to say, remember he has gone away. forget his laugh, forget his grin, forget the dimples on his chin. forget the way he held you tight, remember hes with her friends tonight. forget the time that went so fast, forget the love that moved -it's past. forget he said hed leave you never, remember that he is gone forever.


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on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:49 am
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Like men we'll face the murderous, cowardly pack, pressed to the wall--Dying but fighting back." -Claude Mckay

yea, i need to start writting in formats but i tend to just write. ill do my best in the future though :D lol

on Sep. 4 2009 at 6:15 pm
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
52 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Like men we'll face the murderous, cowardly pack, pressed to the wall--Dying but fighting back." -Claude Mckay

no worries, you'll find someone else after awhile. im only on my third year of tryin to forget, but still. i know its hard, but you'll find someone better. ;-}

on Aug. 4 2009 at 3:51 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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I had to read this again. I need it as a supporter, how sad!

on Aug. 4 2009 at 3:29 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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i love this one! It's so true... And it has a nice beat to it. But easier said than done, lmao. I've been trying to forget this boy for 7 years! Lol, I'm 14. Help me if you can, rolf!

Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 1:27 am
I love this poem..I can really relate

Schubster said...
on Aug. 3 2009 at 1:17 pm
very true and great poem :) i loved it. The rhymes really added to the flow. However, you may want to consider the format of the poem...like try stanzas. only a suggestion tho :) other than that, awesome job.

on Aug. 2 2009 at 8:14 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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Oh, wow. i'm guessing that you don't want pity, but i'm sorry anyway. Awesome poem, incredibly expressive.

Em-ily SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2009 at 6:50 am
Em-ily SILVER, Temecula, California
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Awe! I love it!

on Aug. 2 2009 at 2:20 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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wow that was uber good i really like your work keep writing because i loved it!

Katrselyn said...
on Aug. 2 2009 at 12:33 am
Katrselyn, Kankakee, Illinois
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IT IS SOO sad just like a guy i liked and he tore me away moved and then he got a girlfriend like dat!!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 10:22 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Oooh, I love this. You may want to put it in more of a poem form rather than a paragraph, but this is awesome. ZERO

sanra SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2009 at 7:17 pm
sanra SILVER, Far Rockaway, New York
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i love it.




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