Dominoes Land

July 21, 2009
By stephaniekip PLATINUM, Cranford, New Jersey
stephaniekip PLATINUM, Cranford, New Jersey
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She knew this would happen, that we'd be apart,
That you'd take a dagger straight to my heart.
My first real something is now just a fling,
That love you have for me no longer means a thing.
Everything we had went straight down the tubes,
Upon entering a game, who expects to lose?
She knew this would happen, if not by her hand,
I suppose this is where the dominoes land.



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Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 11:50 pm
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
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WOW! I am in love with the last line (:

on Aug. 4 2009 at 3:31 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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i love this poem. I can really feel your pain. Great title too!

on Aug. 3 2009 at 9:46 pm
stephaniekip PLATINUM, Cranford, New Jersey
47 articles 5 photos 18 comments
Aw, thank you, guys. I really appreciate your comments!

on Aug. 3 2009 at 7:40 pm
awesome!! u r sooo talented. i love the last line. keep writing!

on Aug. 2 2009 at 2:23 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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o my goodness this is such a awesome beautiful poem! <3, Kayla

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 10:23 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

This is AMAZING with a capital ZING! ZERO




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