Dominoes Land

She knew this would happen, that we'd be apart,
That you'd take a dagger straight to my heart.
My first real something is now just a fling,
That love you have for me no longer means a thing.
Everything we had went straight down the tubes,
Upon entering a game, who expects to lose?
She knew this would happen, if not by her hand,
I suppose this is where the dominoes land.





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Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 11:50 pm
WOW! I am in love with the last line (:
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2009 at 3:31 am
i love this poem. I can really feel your pain. Great title too!
 
stephaniekip This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 9:46 pm
Aw, thank you, guys. I really appreciate your comments!
 
angel.in.disguise said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 7:40 pm
awesome!! u r sooo talented. i love the last line. keep writing!
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2009 at 2:23 am
o my goodness this is such a awesome beautiful poem! <3, Kayla
 
Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 10:23 pm
This is AMAZING with a capital ZING! ZERO
 
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