July 19, 2009
She told him he was ugly
And that he should just go away.
She said he wasn't needed here.
Not now, or any day.

She made him feel so awful;
That his life was a mistake.
Her words stabbed him like a knife.
His heart began to break.

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lolsmileyface(= said...
May 30, 2010 at 10:14 pm
wow amazing i dont know why your poems havent bin in the top voted
SagaLiSela This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 4:21 pm
This poem has such a wonderful rhythm!
Great job, it's is a heatbreaker, but very good.
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