She told him he was ugly
And that he should just go away.
She said he wasn't needed here.
Not now, or any day.

She made him feel so awful;
That his life was a mistake.
Her words stabbed him like a knife.
His heart began to break.

Join the Discussion

This article has 2 comments. Post your own now!

lolsmileyface(= said...
May 30, 2010 at 10:14 pm
wow amazing i dont know why your poems havent bin in the top voted
SagaLiSela This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 4:21 pm
This poem has such a wonderful rhythm!
Great job, it's is a heatbreaker, but very good.
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback