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Friendship is exactly as it sounds; a ship of friends.
Who work together to get the ship moving.
Who live with each other’s actions and decisions.
Who help the others with their problems, should they arise.
There are calm waters; when our friendship lies undisturbed.
There are fierce storms; short squalls and long tempests.
New crewmembers are added.
Others are washed overboard; but the best hang on.
Yes, friendship is exactly as it sounds; yet much harder than it seems.




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Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 10:01 am:
I really like this :)
 
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LieutenantStrange said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:32 pm:
:O This is the one you read in class! I'm so happy you put it up here, I love it!
 
Lindsey_O replied...
May 11, 2010 at 7:55 pm :
Yea it is! haha i put this up here a while ago... but I'm glad you like it! :D
 
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iwantcoconow said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 4:27 am:
nice poem I like it alot
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:51 am :
Thanks! :D
 
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amyxu said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 9:32 pm:
This is a very creative poem. Nice job.
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:51 am :
Thank you very much! :D
 
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Passion03 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:58 pm:
Nice job
It's a very different perception of friendship that i had never thought of
I really liked it
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:53 am :
Thank you!!! Glad you liked it!!!
 
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EdytD said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:54 pm:
Wow, this is really neat. I never considered friendship as, literally, a ship. Great job!
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:53 am :
I know haha I don't know where the idea for this came from... huh! hahaha but thank you soo much!!! :D
 
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tor10jax said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 7:10 pm:
Wow. I never would have thought of all that, either. Good job. Let me know when you put something else up on teenink. I want to see it. :)
Keep writing!
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:54 am :
Thank you!! I'll keep on writing! :D
 
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Mikey123 said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 4:19 am:
I want do anything here
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:54 am :
thanks haha :D
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 3:41 pm:
WHOA!!! this is such a creative piece. i never would have thought of all of that and put in together. i love the symbols you took that come from a ship and relate it to friendship. this a great piece! well done, you have great writing ablilites :) check out some of my work and comment please :) and please keep writing
 
Lindsey_O replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 9:52 am :
XDDDD Thank you!!! And I'll be sure to do that as soon as I get a chance!
 
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