July 16, 2009
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life is complicated
like fancy lace
everything is detailed
and put into place
life is like a rollercoaster
it has ups and downs
sometimes you are happy
sometimes you frown
Life is a chance
like a board game
Youll never know what will happen
itll never be the same
Life is a story
from beginning to end
Even if it stops with death
that you never intend

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SickImage said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 12:53 am
Nice. I read most of your stuff. I really like this one, and the one about Jesus
kiwi12 replied...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 9:23 pm
thanks a lot! I have more stuff coming, too.
despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 3:29 pm
I really like this! It has a great rhyme scheme and I like how you keep things blunt and simple with no capitalization. Great job! P.S. Thank you so much for the comments, like you I LOVE THEM!!!!
kiwi12 said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 5:58 pm
beauty76k said...
Aug. 13, 2009 at 6:25 pm
thats really good!! ty for the comment on long gone! I also looked on ur profile and I we have some things in common
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