Life

July 16, 2009
By kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments

life is complicated
like fancy lace
everything is detailed
and put into place
life is like a rollercoaster
it has ups and downs
sometimes you are happy
sometimes you frown
Life is a chance
like a board game
Youll never know what will happen
itll never be the same
Life is a story
from beginning to end
Even if it stops with death
that you never intend


The author's comments:
Honest stuff. Really.

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on Jan. 5 2010 at 9:23 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
thanks a lot! I have more stuff coming, too.

on Jan. 4 2010 at 12:53 am
SickImage SILVER, Klamath Falls, Oregon
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
The room was very quiet. I walked over to the TV set and turned it onto a dead channel-white noise at maximum decibels, a fine sound for sleeping, a powerful continuous hiss to drown out everything strange."

Nice. I read most of your stuff. I really like this one, and the one about Jesus

on Dec. 28 2009 at 3:29 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

I really like this! It has a great rhyme scheme and I like how you keep things blunt and simple with no capitalization. Great job! P.S. Thank you so much for the comments, like you I LOVE THEM!!!!

on Aug. 14 2009 at 5:58 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
cool.=]

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on Aug. 13 2009 at 6:25 pm
Katrselyn, Kankakee, Illinois
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thats really good!! ty for the comment on long gone! I also looked on ur profile and I we have some things in common


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